Revision: grammatical, content, uniqueness, writing style
-making story better
-adding feelings
-adding internal thoughts (expression in pix)
-adding dialogue (speech bubbles)
-adding sound words (onomatopoeia)
-show, not tell
-bit-by-bit action
-looking at beginning
-looking at ending
-developing setting
-deleting what doesn’t belong
-adjusting sequence
-revising to another genre
Editing: technical
-making words better
-checking spelling
-making sure tense is consistent throughout
-checking and correcting grammar
-correcting punctuation
-making story better
-adding feelings
-adding internal thoughts (expression in pix)
-adding dialogue (speech bubbles)
-adding sound words (onomatopoeia)
-show, not tell
-bit-by-bit action
-looking at beginning
-looking at ending
-developing setting
-deleting what doesn’t belong
-adjusting sequence
-revising to another genre
Editing: technical
-making words better
-checking spelling
-making sure tense is consistent throughout
-checking and correcting grammar
-correcting punctuation